Smoking must be stopped

     These days too many people smoke, even teenagers. Smoking is bad for your health and the person right beside you that has to smell the cigaratte. If you keep'em smoking, you will get cancer and obiassly you will die.

     One year ago, my school teacher showed a video how bad smoking was and I relized I should never smoke. There was a research that 10% of smokers get cancer. It says 10% doesn't mean understand the reasearch as that it will gonna never happen around you. The population of Korea is about 60 million. and  if 30 million of people smokes, 30000 of Koreans will die by cancers. Well there will be more thant 30 million smokers in Korea.

     Some people wants to prevent smoking cigarette, but it's imppossible. Once you start, there's no stopping. That's why smokers  always think about smoking cigarattes, even though cigarattes contains nicotine and Tars which are the one of the dangerous thing in the world.

     Every one knows that smoking is bad but they don't know much about the reason. Firstable it will make your throat dirty and the other might smell cigaratte from you. If a lady smokes, theier baby will grow as a handicap or maby they could die inside of  one of a smoker's stomach. It would have been really bad if my family smoke, but our family never smoke. Actually, my father used to smoke but He promised us that he will stopped smoking. The world will be a better place without cigarattes so I think smoking should be banned forever.

    Eddition was really hard, because of reading other people's handwriting, diffrent thought, and a guy wrote a stupid joke that it made me really mad. I hope to have better Essay next time.